她一度大叫:My dad is die! My dad need money, cash only, if anyone have cash come here. I don't know why you people no money and still stand here and don't go to work!
啲英文錯哂。
例如is die,佢可能想講is dead啦。
My dad need money亦錯。人都死咗,仲有需要?死咗嘅人,要用過去式,應該講... needed money. 假如真係現在式,應該係My dad needs ...
If anyone have ...又錯,應該改為If anyone has ...
仲有好多錯,不能盡錄。